COWBOY
Posts : 3
Join date : 2010-08-23
Location : england
 | Subject: SOMEONE ???  Mon Aug 23, 2010 5:04 am | |
| Someone came knocking at my wee small door,
Someone came knocking im sure,sure, sure,
i listened, i opened, i looked to left and right,
but nothing was a stirring in the still dark night,
only the busy beetles tap,tapping in the wall,
only from the forest the screech owls call ,
so i know not who came knocking, at all, at all , at all.  | |
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Mayflow
Starfleet Commander
Posts : 341
Join date : 2009-05-20
| | Subject: Re: SOMEONE ??? Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:17 am | |
| Did you write this yourself? I think it actually quite good. | |
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COWBOY
Posts : 3
Join date : 2010-08-23
Location : england
| | Subject: Re: SOMEONE ??? Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:41 am | |
| - Mayflow wrote:
- Did you write this yourself? I think it actually quite good.
Thank you | |
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Searching Poet
Posts : 7
Join date : 2015-04-21
Location : California
| | Subject: Re: SOMEONE ??? Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:34 am | |
| - COWBOY wrote:
- Someone came knocking at my wee small door,
Someone came knocking im sure,sure, sure,
i listened, i opened, i looked to left and right,
but nothing was a stirring in the still dark night,
only the busy beetles tap,tapping in the wall,
only from the forest the screech owls call ,
so i know not who came knocking, at all, at all , at all. This makes me think of the Raven tapping at the door, I like the lyrical flow, great job! | |
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