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COWBOY

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PostSubject: SOMEONE ???   Mon Aug 23, 2010 5:04 am

Someone came knocking at my wee small door,
Someone came knocking im sure,sure, sure,
i listened, i opened, i looked to left and right,
but nothing was a stirring in the still dark night,
only the busy beetles tap,tapping in the wall,
only from the forest the screech owls call ,
so i know not who came knocking, at all, at all , at all.
Rolling Eyes
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PostSubject: Re: SOMEONE ???   Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:17 am

Did you write this yourself? I think it actually quite good.
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PostSubject: Re: SOMEONE ???   Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:41 am

Mayflow wrote:
Did you write this yourself? I think it actually quite good.
Thank you
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PostSubject: Re: SOMEONE ???   Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:34 am

COWBOY wrote:
Someone came knocking at my wee small door,
Someone came knocking im sure,sure, sure,
i listened, i opened, i looked to left and right,
but nothing was a stirring in the still dark night,
only the busy beetles tap,tapping in the wall,
only from the forest the screech owls call ,
so i know not who came knocking, at all, at all , at all.
 Rolling Eyes

This makes me think of the Raven tapping at the door, I like the lyrical flow, great job!
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