COWBOY
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-08-23 Location : england
| Subject: SOMEONE ??? Mon Aug 23, 2010 5:04 am | |
| Someone came knocking at my wee small door, Someone came knocking im sure,sure, sure, i listened, i opened, i looked to left and right, but nothing was a stirring in the still dark night, only the busy beetles tap,tapping in the wall, only from the forest the screech owls call , so i know not who came knocking, at all, at all , at all. | |
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Mayflow Starfleet Commander
Posts : 341 Join date : 2009-05-20
| Subject: Re: SOMEONE ??? Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:17 am | |
| Did you write this yourself? I think it actually quite good. | |
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COWBOY
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-08-23 Location : england
| Subject: Re: SOMEONE ??? Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:41 am | |
| - Mayflow wrote:
- Did you write this yourself? I think it actually quite good.
Thank you | |
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Searching Poet
Posts : 7 Join date : 2015-04-21 Location : California
| Subject: Re: SOMEONE ??? Wed Apr 22, 2015 7:34 am | |
| - COWBOY wrote:
- Someone came knocking at my wee small door,
Someone came knocking im sure,sure, sure, i listened, i opened, i looked to left and right, but nothing was a stirring in the still dark night, only the busy beetles tap,tapping in the wall, only from the forest the screech owls call , so i know not who came knocking, at all, at all , at all. This makes me think of the Raven tapping at the door, I like the lyrical flow, great job! | |
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